Hi Leonidas. It's Mikael from Yaldhurst school. I really like how you have lots of information about why dogs are better than cats. And how you think fox hunting should be banned, Even though I don't think is should, Only to the people that don't eat the fox that they got. Next time I think you should try to say what you have been doing and why. ANd try to make the letters that need to be a capital. Apart from that it is good.
Hi Leonidas. It's Mikael from Yaldhurst school. I really like how you have lots of information about why dogs are better than cats. And how you think fox hunting should be banned, Even though I don't think is should, Only to the people that don't eat the fox that they got. Next time I think you should try to say what you have been doing and why. ANd try to make the letters that need to be a capital. Apart from that it is good.
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