Duffy Assembly Recount
WALT: Write a recount with the right structure
WALT: Use interesting words to make your recount more exciting
Introduction: 3 sentences
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Melanie, Ashley, Duffy
Have you ever been to a Duffy show? Well I have and I am going to tell you what happened. On Wednesday 7th February teams 4 and 5 went to the school hall to watch the Duffy show. There were three characters and their names were Ashley, Melanie and Duffy.
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Body: 3-4 sentences
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1.They were talking about the story and they ask people if they new what the story was.
2. We walked to the assembly and we stopped a couple of times cause peolple were talking in the line
3. Everywhere.
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Body: 3-4 sentences
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1.the story was about sport and they were like it was them in that story
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2.the duffy assembly wasabout being a good sport in life and about being a sore loser that's what the story was about.
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Body:: 3-4 sentences
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1.when when we arrived to the assembly it was fun .
2.to be a good sport in rugby and in soccer and also not to be a sore loser.
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Conclusion: Two sentences
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1.That reading books are an adventure and fun
2.good and exciting and that when i read a book it will make me feel like im o n adventure with book.
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Now that you have made a plan, it is time to write your recount in full sentences. Start your writing here: even tho i did not go to the assembly i know what it the feeling its bein bored and being excited but still you gotta like what did for you and everyone else you know so that's my recount.